The Perfect Lie (First Draft) The sun had taken sanctuary behind the dark clouds, which now dominated the heavens above the city of El Morado. Dark,

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Saad Javid        The Perfect Lie        10NB - Ms. Pepper

The Perfect Lie (First Draft)

The sun had taken sanctuary behind the dark clouds, which now dominated the heavens above the city of El Morado. Dark, identical stone buildings flanked the River Morado, a concoction of sludge and slime which flowed though the city like horrifically contaminated honey. Perhaps the most significant structure on this part of the river was the City Palace, a colossal building with its towers and turrets shrouded in the silhouette of the soaring clouds, and secrecy.

        In the forest surrounding the Palace, Commander Twitchell, El Morado City Watch, flung himself to the ground to evade a small tree. Beside him, Corporal Coulomb hurled himself at the Giant uttering a shrill battle cry.

        “Look Out!” cried Twitchell.

Too late. An immense hand knocked the corporal twenty feet away as if he was a fly while Captain Spoonsbury marched up to the scene and saluted.

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        “The Patrician wishes to see you, sir,” said Spoonsbury eyeing the scene facing him.

        “Take care of this until I return,” replied Twitchell indicating at the Giant behind him, who was now being amused by a dandelion.

The Giant was a human-like creature only very tall and astonishingly fat. It had hair that reminded a person of coffee and its wrinkled face was matted by a dark brown beard. Most people would think it looked guiltless like a tree. But to Twitchell it was monster, a gigantic demon with the brain of a mule. Twitchell also held the view ...

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