Choose a place which you have vivid memories of, or which you remember as being particularly disappointing - Try to write in a similar style to Bill Bryson, to try to interest and entertain your reader.

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Choose a place which you have vivid memories of, or which you remember as being particularly disappointing. Try to write in a similar style to Bill Bryson, to try to interest and entertain your reader.

      Riding along in the car I was so excited. “I’m finally here!” I kept thinking. After all the weeks of waiting, and the very long plane journey, we were finally here in Pakistan. On our way to meet all our relatives whom I’d never met before.

 An hour had already passed since we left the airport, and I was starting to get a bit restless.

   “When are we going to get there? Are we there yet?” I asked every 5 seconds. Each time, my dad replied

   “In about another hour No we’re not there yet.”

An hour later, I’d stopped asking “Are we there yet?” and had fallen asleep. I felt someone tugging at my arm and woke suddenly.

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“Wake up Zarina, we’re here!”  It was my dad, and he looked just as excited as I was.

“Yeah! We’re here!” I jumped up, now wide awake, opened the door and got out. The first thing that crossed my mind was “What is that SMELL?!”

I took a step forward, hoping to have a look around, but before I got any further

SQUISH!!

“Oh my… EW! What’s that?!” I cried, hopping about on one foot “Ew! Get it off me!”

Just my luck. I’d stepped into a pile of cow dung, and now my foot looked like it was covered ...

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