Compare the ways in which Ballantyne and Golding close their respective novels. Which do you think is the more optimistic? How does the language in each convey the attitude of the author towards his subject?

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Compare the ways in which Ballantyne and Golding close their respective novels. Which do you think is the more optimistic? How does the language in each convey the attitude of the author towards his subject?

William Golding and RM Ballantyne have both written books about children in extreme situations; landing on an island without any of their parents, although in Coral island, natives inhabit the island. But the language, attitude and atmosphere created are very different. Another contrast between the two books is the mood on the island; in Lord of The Flies, the group of boys turn into ruthless savages; whereas the mood on Coral Island is much lighter and optimistic.

        One major difference between the two books is the language used to convey the atmosphere. Lord of The Flies uses very vivid and descriptive language to convey a sense of darkness, despair, fear and every man for himself. Golding’s rich language and use of alliteration also helps to create a fast pace to the final chapter, “Hopeless fear on flying feet, rushing through the forest towards the open beach.” This shows how Golding creates the frantic speed of the chase through the forest. This is in contrast to Ballantyne, who creates a light, sombre, and surreal atmosphere using old, pedantic language to convey this; “May it not, perchance,” and “doomed ere long to unite for the last time.” Ballantyne also develops a feeling of optimism and serenity on the island; “We glided quickly over the lagoon under a cloud of canvas.”

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        Another substantial difference between Lord of The Flies and Coral Island is the importance religion plays in maintaining civilisation on the island. Ballantyne uses Christianity to hold the group together, and gradually, even the natives are converted into the Christian ways. “Tararo came to him and said he wished to become a Christian;” this wish from one of the natives is a major event in Coral Island as the others soon follow his lead, meaning the boys improve their relationship with the experienced natives. In contrast, the only religion in Lord of The Flies is one of savageness, pigs’ heads ...

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