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Down Below…

“Becky, do you want to go with me to the school dance?” asked Tom. “I sure would Tom…I don’t want go with anyone else.” Tom and Becky were the best couple at Manning High School. Many people said they were meant for each other and they would have a future together. That same day Tom had given her a beautiful necklace with a pendant, as a gift.

        The night of the dance, everyone was filled with laughter as they were enjoying themselves. Towards the end of the dance, Tom and Becky went for a walk around the school they had first met in. This would also be the last time they both would walk as a couple as they were leaving for college. They decided to stroll to the basement of the school, although it was more of Tom’s idea.

         They went down and they held each other and had a slow dance as the music from the sports hall was still loud enough to hear. Becky said, “It’s rather nice to dance with you alone”.  The basement was chilly. But strangely Tom was getting a bit sweaty and overwrought. Out of the left pocket of Tom’s tuxedo, he took something sharp out. It was his mother’s kitchen knife. “Tom what are you doing with that knife?!” Becky looked into Tom’s cold stare and could see he was irate.

“Tom please put the knife down! What do you think you’re doing? Why are you doing this?” Becky tried stopping him but he was too strong for her. At that sudden moment he struck the knife right into Becky’s back. There was a horrifying scream. It struck again and there was another scream. The blood from Becky’s wound leaked out slowly down her extravagant white gown. She looked into Tom’s eyes scared and confused.

 Then Tom yelled, “I’m sorry Becky…You shouldn’t have…” whilst ripping of the necklace he bought for her. Then Tom sliced her on the throat with his blood covered kitchen knife. It was too late for Becky to hear what Tom was trying to say. He dropped her to the floor as she lay there dead.

Deviously he planned to hide the corpse below the wooden planks at the rear room of the basement which was full of old dusty books and a lot of cobwebs. He cleared up the basement of the school of all the evidence but what he forgot was the necklace with that beautiful pendant. Rumour has it Becky still lurks the dark and dusty basement but as a ghost!

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“So that’s the story of the famous couple of Manning High” said Mrs. Parker. In that split of a second the bell rang breaking the silence that erupted in the room. “Cool!” replied Eric sheepishly as the others were getting chills down their spine. “God that’s scary…I don’t think I’m going to sleep tonight!” said Kelly. “Kelly stop bugging you know it isn’t true…ghosts don’t exist. Mrs. Parker said it was a rumour. Look man you all can think whatever you want to think but I am not falling for this.” replied Ryan.

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