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Asadullah Haider        English Coursework        Page

English Coursework: Descriptive Writing

Endless. The best way to describe Toys R Us; colossal isles which stretch, twist and twirl around the store. I couldn’t believe my eyes the very first time I entered, I felt as if I has stepped into a whole new world which I thought was only possible in my dreams. Standing outside I stared into the mesmerising gigantic colourful letters hanging above me like a rainbow, as I glared up towards the entrance. I entered watchfully and the doors opened magically by themselves as if to warmly invite me in. I took a deep long breath, the air was fresh and full of excitement; I ran inside, the essence of enchantment was in the air. The store was huge; there were toys of all kinds everywhere: dazzling warm bears, berry red balls, pink hula hoops and wildly coloured slides.

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The nearest isle was filled with never ending stacked columns of board games which reached up towards the roof. There stood Monopoly and Cluedo, the classic family games which reminded me off Christmas and filled me with an affectionate fuzzy feeling. My hand brushed against the chilly metallic surface of the shelves as I walked along the aisle towards the large Lego plane hovering at the end.

The echoes of children’s voices was all around, their faces enlightened with happiness. The Lego area was a construction yard, hundreds of tiny colourful bricks making up huge wild infrastructures; a vast army ...

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