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Louise Todd 11I

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English Story.

Dreams

The sunlight flooded the runway and the grass was the colour of emeralds:

“It looks nice, much Better than everyone said England would be. No

torrential rain, and no ugly grey skies! What a blessing, the sun has come out for me!”                                        

Louisa thought to herself as she stared excitedly out of the aeroplane window and she smiled a warm smile to the seat in front of her, and then looked up at the red seatbelt sign above her head. The writing made no sense to her, but she could understand the picture. She pulled apart the seat belt clasp and yawned. It had been a very long and boring trip in which Louisa had slept the majority of the journey.

As well as fatigue, Louisa was also aware that she was hungry. She hadn’t eaten for hours and her stomach kept rumbling.

“I wish you would be quiet”

Louisa whispered to her stomach,

“People will think that I have swallowed a lion!”  

She had woken up in a very happy mood. Maybe this had been a great idea all along, just like Yarik had told her.

“Yarik”

Louisa sighed under her breath. She wondered if he were missing her as much as she missed him, already after only twelve hours.

From beneath her seat, Louisa pulled out a blue velvet handbag, neatly embroidered with gold stitching. She reached inside and searched about the bag clumsily. Seconds later she produced a photograph. On it were the figures of two people, a man and a woman. Dressed for winter in thick gloves and scarves, woollen hats and big boots. They were standing side by side, on a blanket of crisp white snow, in front of The Towers of Kremlin in Moscow, Russia. The girl in the photo was Louisa, and the man standing beside her, Yarik. Her husband.

Gently with her fingers Louisa rubbed the photograph of Yarik’s face affectionately. She put the picture to her cheek, closed her eyes, and tried hard to visualise his face, and remember his smell. When tears started welling in the backs of her eyes, Louisa put the photograph away, picked up her belongings and tried to compose herself:        

“It’s only for one year, and I trust Yarik, but I know I am going to miss him incredibly. I must write him every day and stay strong, for both our sakes.”

*

Louisa Vachnadze was born into a poor family of farmers in an isolated village called Hugir, on Olk’han Island along side the Lake Baikal, in former soviet Russia. She is 19 years old and a clever girl who excelled at school. She has a good relationship with her father Alexander and her mother Polina. She is very close to her older sisters, Inna and Colette and her younger brother Alexei. Her parents are religious and together the family would attend the Russian Orthodox Church in the neighbouring town of Irkutsk. Coming from such a close knit and loving family Louisa had a sheltered childhood and grew to be a content yet naïve adult who is optimistic and always tries to see the best in everyone and everything.    

Louisa is beautiful. Her hair is light ash blonde, like spun gold. It is long, thick and straight. Her eyes are round and shining, the colour of sapphires, rimmed with hundreds of long black lashes. She has a very smooth complexion, she has defined cheekbones that have natural glow and are softer than that of a small child’s. Her lips are perfectly formed, full and heart shaped, stained rouge like the reddest rose. She is 5’7, slim with very long legs.  

Every winter in Hugir it snowed heavily. It was always very deep and would last for long periods of time. For months Alexander would be unable to work and there was often a shortage of food and electricity. Over time the Vachnadze family learnt to deal with it, and thanked the Lord above every night, for keeping them safe and giving them shelter. On the eve of Louisa’s 16th Birthday it snowed particularly heavily and the Baikal Lake froze over. So in the morning after breakfast, Louisa and her brother decided to go skating on the Lake.

To begin with the lake was full of happy children all smiling and milling about merrily. In amongst them were Alexei and Louisa, who skated together happily for hours. They had a lot fun and laughed a great deal, it was a brilliant start to Louisa’s birthday, and she valued the time she spent with her brother. Sadly, at around lunchtime, the air got very cold and the lake started clearing of people. It seemed an appropriate time for Louisa to take her brother home. Besides, they were both soaked through; Alexei’s lips were going blue, and though her little brother protested Louisa was sure that he was tired and probably very hungry. Alexei had not been able to sleep through the storm the previous night, and neither two children had eaten since breakfast, at least 4 hours ago.

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She took careful hold of Alexei’s hand and together they skated to the side of the lake where they had left their belongings and could sit down and take their skates off. After a while, the older more experienced skaters began piling onto the lake. Excited, Alexei insisted that the pair stay and watch. For a while, brother and sister sat, staring dumbfounded at the different boys and girls whizzing round the ice. There was one boy in particular who caught Alexei’s eye. He was twirling, and flipping in all different directions. He was amazingly majestic. It looked as if ...

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