How far are the witches responsible for Macbeth's downfall?

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How far are the witches responsible for Macbeth’s downfall?

        The witches are quite a main part in the play ‘Macbeth’ and are seen as the main or only contributors towards Macbeth’s downfall. However, I believe that there are other possible contributors including Macbeth himself. Lady Macbeth can also be seen as a possible contributor as she thought of the evil plan by herself without conferring it with Macbeth.

        The weird sisters would be seen as ‘evil’ in the play especially for the contemporary audience. This is because in Shakespeare’s day, they were all Protestants so thought that witches were evil and should be damned to hell. They were seen worse than rebels. They were not only political traitors, but spiritual traitors as well.

When we first see the witches (weird sisters) in Act One Scene One, we as the audience do not know what they are or where they have come from. However, because of the surroundings and the atmosphere we see them as ‘evil’ and keep this assumption throughout the play, ‘…the fog and filthy air.’ Even Macbeth and Banquo are unsure about the sisters’ identity when they meet them on the heath in Act One Scene Three, ‘That look not like th’ inhabitants o’ th’ earth…’

        Macbeth is given three prophecies when he first meets the weird sisters, ‘All hail Macbeth…Thane of Glamis…Thane of Cawdor…King hereafter!’(Act One Scene Three) At first, he does not believe them, but when he receives the news that he has been given the title of Thane of Cawdor, he starts to believe in the prophecies.

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        Macbeth believed in these prophecies so much that he ended up sending Lady Macbeth a letter explaining everything that had gone on that day, ‘Enter Lady Macbeth, reading a letter.’ (Act One Scene Five) This then leads to Lady Macbeth being seen as a reason why Macbeth had a downfall.

Lady Macbeth may be seen as another contributor to Macbeth’s downfall and I think that she is to an extent. This is because as soon as she receives the letter from Macbeth saying that he had been given the title of Thane of Cawdor, she becomes inspired with the idea ...

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The candidate does use several quotations but there are cases where these are used simply to retell the story, there is very little analysis and when given it is of a basic level. There is no mention of linguistic techniques, such as the use of metaphors and alliteration and how these add to play, at GCSE level this is an important aspect. The essay doesn’t flow as well as it could and there times when the candidate jumps back and forth between points. The language used is about average for a GCSE candidate, therefore in the D grade bracket. The introduction isn’t very clear, it doesn’t quite answer the question and I’m not sure how much thought was put into it. Again the conclusion has similar problems, and doesn’t quite manage to relate to the question, the candidate needs to summarise why the witches are not responsible if they are of that opinion.

This essay question gives a great opportunity to do some independent research and talk about how witches were perceived in those times. The candidate has added an example into the second paragraph but this could be extended and more points could be added throughout the essay. For example the reason Shakespeare uses three witches is because the number three was considered to be magical, this hints that the witch’s have magical powers. I feel that to some extent the candidate has missed the point of the question and would benefit from refocusing the essay to action of the witches.

The candidate has attempted to answer the question, however the essay feels a bit jumbled. It would flow better if s/he focused on all the reasons why and why not the witches could be held responsible for Macbeth’s downfall and then all the reason why and why not Lady Macbeth is responsible and so forth. When discussing the witches you could use more references to how the scene is set to make the audience think of evil doings. This is done well in the third paragraph but could be elaborated.