• Join over 1.2 million students every month
  • Accelerate your learning by 29%
  • Unlimited access from just £6.99 per month

Identity Crisis

Extracts from this document...


Identity Crisis Children could be heard through the grilled windows, black from times of neglect, of the warehouse. Summer had just begun, with the children now on holiday and more work to do. Laughter and shouting came from the wasteland outside, yet it was like the wind was alive, for no one could be seen. The sun was now high above the cracked corrugated walls of the warehouse, but inside it was cool and dark, with a slight smell of damp and only a few rays of light shining across the sharpened knives and the disfigured manikins, used for films. Sitting all alone, with just sculptures for company, serial killer Paul washed his hands of the deep, red stain that was slowly running down his arm and dying his shirt sleeve. This was Paul's third killing within 3 months. Nights hadn't agreed with Paul after seeing his father murdered, when he was just a boy. ...read more.


A report, that caught the team's attention, was of another body being found in a bathtub, with a bullet through the chest and a tape recorder. Catherine was first to attend the scene. It really was a shame when a life got robbed in such a terrible, painful way. The team later found hairs, fibres and fingerprints. But the most successful piece of evidence was the tape recorder. Paul had managed to mess up the age of the victim. Although Chris believed Paul did not commit the other two murders, he was shocked when Sara explained what was happening. The victim had a birthday on August 17th and was born in 1957, which is a year earlier than Paul's birth. So presumably, the killer's next target was born on August 17th, 1956...which just happened to be Chris's birthday. Paul had had all his ideas mapped out in his head on how to murder the head of CSI. ...read more.


She wanted desperately to find his two other possible victims, avoiding double jeopardy. Without waiting for Chris to come back from Paul's latest crime spree, Catherine set out to find any unsolved cases of related people murdered in the run down streets of New York. Later, the team decided that they had enough evidence to order a raid on the isolated warehouse where Paul had worked, but when they got there it was empty, all the sculptures and manikins had gone, except for a stool that was sitting in the middle of the room with a note on it. The note said, on the front, 'Chris'. But inside it read 'YOU LOSE GAME OVER!!!' Later seen on CCTV, Paul had visited the building where Chris worked and apparently he had left a message, to be relayed to Chris, saying a friend had popped by. Deciding to tease Chris, Paul had waved to the CCTV camera, after just entering a high security building, with no hassle, and escaping the NYPD. ?? ?? ?? ?? Ayiesha Buckle 10HP 08/02/2008 ...read more.

The above preview is unformatted text

This student written piece of work is one of many that can be found in our GCSE Writing to Inform, Explain and Describe section.

Found what you're looking for?

  • Start learning 29% faster today
  • 150,000+ documents available
  • Just £6.99 a month

Not the one? Search for your essay title...
  • Join over 1.2 million students every month
  • Accelerate your learning by 29%
  • Unlimited access from just £6.99 per month

See related essaysSee related essays

Related GCSE Writing to Inform, Explain and Describe essays

  1. Mansion of a serial killer

    day as dawn came upon us, we went down stairs and told his mum he was coming to stay at my place she said "Ok" And we were on our way. As we stepped out it was starting to get really dark, the clouds were bid and grey and looked like they were about to spit rain at any minute.

  2. A Crisis in My Life.

    I was going through my song and everything was going well, the song sounded great and I was singing all the right notes when in walked a vision that I had only ever seen in my dreams. Then I noticed that the vision was wearing a school uniform.

  • Over 160,000 pieces
    of student written work
  • Annotated by
    experienced teachers
  • Ideas and feedback to
    improve your own work