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It was a hot, sunny Easter holidays in the heart of Luton when Charlie and Rich realised Chip had gone off the rails.

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Gone off Track It was a hot, sunny Easter holidays in the heart of Luton when Charlie and Rich realised Chip had gone off the rails. It all started when Chip got invited to the popular girl Laurens house party on the last day of term. He was boasting to Charlie and rich for 2 weeks before the actual house party. "Chip, Chip! Do you want to come to my house party" said Lauren. A big smile appeared on Chips face. "Well yeah i would love to, but you wouldn't normally invite me to party's" replied chip. "Well if you come along and fit in to our group you will be very popular and to be honest i like you" said Lauren. "Aw thank you, i will be there bang on time and I'll bring lot of alcohol" said Chip finding it hard to speak. "Good, good well see you around then Chip." It was the end of the day and as normal Chip met his best friends Charlie and Rich in the tennis courts. Charlie and Rich are quite nerdy and love making things blow up. ...read more.

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"Well i suppose so, at least your coming out of your shell" "Thanks mum" replied Chip It was 11o'clock the next morning and chip got straight out of bed and on the phone to Richard. "Hey Richey do you wanna come Milton Keynes shopping with me in about 2 hours, my mum let me borrow �50 off her and I've already got �50 so I'm gunner buy some good clothes for Laurens house." "Well ......... err I'm going to my nanas house in London today so i can't sorry Chip" replied Rich. "Ok it's alright have fun." Then he picked up the phone and said the exact same thing to Charlie. Charlie replied, "Sorry mate I've got so much revision to do because I've got my Latin and Spanish exams first thing on Monday." "Ok its fine" replied Chip. The fact is Rich and Charlie just didn't want to go shopping because they absolutely hate it. Chip didn't know what to do and just sat down on his bed thinking what to do whilst watching 4 music on his 32 inch TV. Suddenly his phone started ringing, it was an unknown number so he was a bit scared to pick it up, he plucked up the courage and he answered the phone. ...read more.

Conclusion

Replied Chip in a much exited manner. Lauren showed Chip to the car. It was only a 10 minute car journey from Laurens house to the Arndale shopping centre. When they got in Chip said, "so Lauren lets go to your shops first so i can see what top nosh outfit your buying and maybe I'll get up to big standards like you." "Aw Chip you're so cute," replied impressed Lauren. When they were in Hollister Lauren asked Chip a what colour top she should get. Chip didn't have a clue but said, "Why don't you get the blue one?" "I'm so glad you said that because i thought that one looked good." Also in the shop Lauren brought a pair of ripped skinny jeans. "So, Chip what shop to you want to go into" said Lauren. "Well, is there anywhere i can get Ralph Lauren?" asked Chip. Lauren didn't really know so they walked around and finally found a shop that sold some Ralph Lauren. The first thing that caught Chips eye was a purple polo with red logo. As soon as he saw it he knew he was going to buy it, it was �70 but he didn't care. Lauren had to shoot off home to help her mum with something so Chip called his mum and ask her to pick him up. ...read more.

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