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Look at the different ways in which Shakespeare, Duffy and Clarke present relationships in 'Valentine' 'I wanna be yours' and 'Sonnet 116'

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Look at the different ways in which Shakespeare, Duffy and Clarke present relationships in the three poems The poem Valentine by Carol Ann Duffy is an unusual love poem which 'explodes' romantic clich�s and replaces them with an onion. The poem I wanna be yours by John Cooper Clarke is light-hearted love poem about a man explaining what he will do for the woman in lots of silly ways. The poem Sonnet 116 by William Shakespeare is a typical Shakespearean sonnet which explains all about the 'conditions' of true love. Throughout the poem Valentine, Duffy uses an onion as an extended metaphor for true love. "I give you an onion" Duffy cleverly uses the onion in various different ways to explain her views about love and marriage. She manages to take the idea of cute romantic clich�s and turns them 'upside down' by replacing them with the unusual metaphor of an onion. Duffy doesn't use these clich�s but tells it how it is "I am trying to be truthful" Duffy starts by comparing an onion to "a moon wrapped in brown paper", because the brown paper suggests the brown, ugly outer skin of an onion, but underneath is the glowing moon which is the actual onion under its skin. ...read more.


It could also suggest that this isn't a very serious poem but Clarke always ends each stanza with the same line "i wanna be yours". Nearly all the items that Clarke describes in the poem are regular, household items. "let me be your vacuum cleaner" Clarke compares himself to these items because they are all reliable things that you can always know will be there when you need them - just like a good partner. Clarke also repeats the line "let me be your" for every comparison because it really emphasises the fact the he wants to be hers. Furthermore, the fact that he says "let me be" as opposed to "I will be" shows that he is giving the woman a choice and is not forcing her into anything. Clark uses a very structured rhyme scheme throughout the poem. "dust...rust" "meter...heater" The way Clarke uses rhyming couplets for almost the whole poem gives the poem a very light-hearted mood which again makes the poem seem not very sincere and as though the author is just having a joke. This seems backed up by the line "i don't care" which could mean that the author doesn't really mean what he's saying or it could mean that he doesn't care about anything else except for the woman and will do anything for her. ...read more.


Shakespeare also says that love bears out even to "the edge of doom". This means that true love will last forever, even until both partners are dead and gone. In the final couplet Shakespeare tries to prove that he is right. "If this be error...I never writ, not no man ever loved". What Shakespeare is trying to say is that if he is wrong, then he has never written anything and no man has ever loved. Shakespeare is so certain that what he is writing is true that he is effectively putting his whole career on the line to prove it. In conclusion I think that Sonnet 116 portrays relationships the best because it shows what true love really is and what you have to do to achieve it; there will be 'storms' at times but if your love is true then they will not affect you. Valentine is also quite good but it mainly concentrates on the negative aspects of loves and any positives it does mention are written in a very cynical way. I wanna be yours doesn't really concentrate much on relationships so much as what a man will do for a woman to make her happy; it is a very positive poem but it just seems a bit too childish. ?? ?? ?? ?? Thomas Aird ...read more.

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