Murderer.Tom hated Mr.Diver since he first met him. Mr.Diver is a fat man with hardly any neck. Mr.Diver is a bus driver.

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Sanjayan Ravi

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It was an exquisite day. A 15-year-old boy called Tom who is in year 11 at Charlton high school. Tom is a skinny boy with brown hair and blue eyes. Tom walks to school every school day. As Tom walked he thought back at the day he had yesterday.

   “It wasn’t bad” Tom said to himself. But there is always something in your self, which says opposite to whatever you say or do. It’s of course your mind and it said

   “No you didn’t you had an awful day yesterday. You killed a man!” Yes, Tom did kill a man and he is called Mr.Diver. It’s not because he wanted to kill him it’s because he had to if he want to see his mum and dad together. He wanted his mum and dad together since they divorced. They divorced when Tom was very little so he doesn’t have that much memory of his mum and dad together.

    Mr.Diver is Tom’s mum’s future husband. Tom hated Mr.Diver since he first met him. Mr.Diver is a fat man with hardly any neck. Mr.Diver is a bus driver.

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    If you ask Tom what is his favourite day is he would say Friday because that is the day Tom meets his dad. Mr.Newton is his dad and there is a big difference between Mr.Newton and Mr.Diver maybe this is the reason why Tom hates Mr.Diver. Mr.Newton is a skinny man with long neck.

    Normally Tom and his dad spend Friday afternoons either playing football or go to a restaurant. In restaurant they talk about what happened during the week.

    Since Tom heard that his mum is going to marry Mr.Diver he thought he ...

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