A suspense story. Standing on a plank on a railroad bridge is a man with his hands bound behind his back. Around his neck is a noose.

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Write a story or an episode of suspense in which a character is facing a problem relating to time running out

Standing on a plank on a railroad bridge is a man with his hands bound behind his back. Around his neck is a noose. Twenty feet below him is the swift water of the Owl Creek. Next to him are two men, acting as executioners, with another directing the proceedings. Sentinels stand watch at each end of the bridge. On one bank of the creek is a forest, and on the other bank is a line of trees serving as a stockade.

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The man to be hanged is about 35. As the moment of execution approaches, he closes his eyes to picture his wife and children. A sound – like a hammer striking anvil –interrupts his thoughts. It is rhythmic, like a tolling bell, and grows louder and louder, hurting his ears. The noise is the ticking of his watch. 


If he could somehow free his hands, he thinks, he could remove the noose, jump into the creek, swim to shore below the surface of the water, and escape into the woods.  And then the ground beneath him disappears. He is falling. ...

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