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The Abandoned Mental Hospital I collected several items that I would be in need of because today was when my friends an

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Introduction

The Abandoned Mental Hospital I collected several items that I would be in need of because today was when my friends and I were going to explore Cane Hill, the mental hospital that has been abandoned for years. I gathered a torch, my slingshot and a few French bangers. I left my house feeling thrilled as well as sick, for I was about to enter a hospital that has been haunted even since people worked there. I met Michael and Shaun outside their houses; both of them had torches because we knew it would be pitch black, as dusk came upon us. We set off, for the first five minutes there was complete silence amid us, my friends and I were as jittery as a novice driver as none of us had clue what to expect. ...read more.

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Seeing as I was the biggest, my friends urged me through first. I felt terrified as well as curious. I stepped into a corridor which looked around ten meters long, but as we slowly crept through the corridor it felt like much more, like it never ended. Around the first corner it became pitch black. All we could see was what our torches managed to cover with its light. Michael rummaged through his bag to find a banger. He set it off and threw it into the empty black space. Bang! The French banger let off a noise as loud as a gunshot, but what made us shudder was the echo which was sent through the house which was empty except for what looked like old furniture. ...read more.

Conclusion

I dropped my torch from shock and I sprinted as fast as I possibly could, just to get away. Michael, Shaun and I all started screaming at the top of our voices. I did not bother carefully climbing through the window, at a time like this all my thoughts disappeared as my aim was to be as far away as possible from this house, so I literally leaped through the open window. I couldn't see anything outside since all the surrounding trees blocked what was left of the light. Even at this point the screaming hadn't stopped; it showed just how frightened we really were. We all dashed towards the gate to squeeze through the tiny hole. Finally we were out of the haunted site, all of us feeling scared as well as relieved but the only thing running through our heads was: "Never again." ?? ?? ?? ?? ...read more.

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