This is the beginning to my novel. I tried to make it interesting by creating a strong character and introducing the readers to her early on. I open with speech as I think this is a very effective technique and very attention-grabbing

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This is the beginning to my novel. I tried to make it interesting by creating a strong character and introducing the readers to her early on. I open with speech as I think this is a very effective technique and very attention-grabbing. I also try by adding a small amount of curiosity in the last few lines. Hopefully the reader will want to read on.

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    “If I loose then I suppose it’ll be alright ‘cause I’ll be upset for a little while but then I’ll rise above it. I mean it really doesn’t matter to me if I win or not. I just love to do it.’ Theses words, so innocent and mature seem strange to come from such a frail, small figure.

Ashley, 11years old and born and raised on the rougher side Brooklyn USA. She normally had beautiful tanned clear skin, from her mother and bright, burning eyes from her father. Normally she had rose cheeks and ...

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