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what time you call this

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"What time do you call this?" she said The repairman replied, " well sorry for running late but my car broke down" "Oh well don't worry but I will not be paying you full price" she declared He replied in a rudely manner "Okay madam, I'm really sorry, it wasn't entirely my fault" She interrupted "Quick, quick!!! I'll have to dust the house before my husband comes home, im tired as it is" The repairman started fixing the elevator, it was continuously playing up. the repair man said "this is too dangerous to be in use and someone should have been called out weeks ago other than that it should be working in any second now" She replied, "Oh thanks dear, I shall be paying you nineteen dollars" "Oh yes that will do" he said with a disappointed sigh. ...read more.


I need it fixed now, so it will get fixed now also I have some tools under the sink in the kitchen" she declared Ill have a look, hopefully you have a crowbar, that's all I need" he replied Fast, fast I don't much have time," she said. So the man got the crowbar, put one end in the gap and put all his weight in the other , Then a little gap emerged and a sudden stench infested the nose of the repairman. "Orrghh that bloody smells" he shouted "What, what is the matter?" She shouted Mrs foster then went towards the elevator and said "open up we'll see what has made that ghastly smell if you be quick" Then man opened up the rest of the lift so they could see what in the lift. ...read more.


luxurious bed that she had, it consists of a king bed, which had a crown looking thing at each corner of the bed. Half asleep she heard a creeping noise of footsteps; she thought it was nothing but her mind playing on her. The noise got closer and closer, but she was getting sleepier and sleepier. With her eyes slightly closed she could feel a shadow over her, She reluctantly opened her eyes and to her amazement it was Mr foster, "Its alright your safe with me, go back to sleep" he muttered While she was falling into deep asleep, he quietly went to the closet and opens the draw He took a sharp object and walked over to the bed was went towards Mrs foster, put his hand in a plastic bag then stabbed her in the neck. ...read more.

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