Original writing
Lee and his mates where out getting drunk and everything late at night, but they always found themselves to be bored. Later that evening lee came home late in my friend’s car, which obviously was stolen. as lee entered, there sitting on the stairs like a pack of mulls ready to attack, a concerned mum. Lee as usual answered back to her and always ending up with the same excuse, ‘Ill won’t be late tomorrow’. However, his mum was not quite sure.
As lee strolled along the park with his mates, but he did not seem to notice that they were been followed. As they turned around the corner lee and his mates found them trapped, nowhere to go. As lee’s friends tried and made a runner, he soon realised that now lee was on his own, as the attacker made his move lee quickly used his karate move that he had learned from his youui-sensie, and quickly made a runner. lee did runaway from the attacker, but the attacker was not giving up that easily he reached out a pocket knife and slashed it towards lee which left behind a wound that will not heal by its own, as lee tried to go around him the attacker caught him and gave him a low blow on the side of his ribs.