"War and the Transformation of British Society 1903 - 1928" - Answer to pg 87, q 5

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World War One marked the beginning of change for women- it was the first time that they were given opportunities to work as men worked – in munitions factories and farmland – to behave as men behaved – going out without chaperones, wearing trousers, instead of skirts – and even the war itself (soon after which some women were granted the vote) was considered a massive step forward. Sources A, B, C and F support the fact that the war did indeed change the positions of women, whereas sources D and E make it appear as though there was little, to no, change.

Source A describes the ‘wartime business girl,’ who, as she never did before, is ‘dining out’ without ‘the company of a man friend.’ This shows a change of attitude – this, before the war, would never have been allowed. Source B also notes a change in the way ‘men speak and write about women,’ and the fact that women themselves find this ‘vastly amusing.’ This suggests that the way men perceive women is now different- because women themselves ‘have not changed with the war,’; only men’s opinions, for they realized ‘they could not afford to hem women in with old restrictions,’ as during the war they proved what they were capable of, a point supported by Source C, a report carried out in 1918, which detailed the work of men and of women, and seen in this report, on nine counts, women’s work was either superior or equal to that of the men. Before the war, women would not have had this sort of opportunity. Source F is also similar; it shows the employment of women, and the great rise from 1914 to 1920, and the incredible peak in 1918. They were working, by 1920, in areas that were not previously accepting or accommodating towards women, such as transport and agriculture. This, alone, shows great advancement.

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However, some of the supporting sources are questionable, namely A; it is extracted from an article by the Daily Mail, and was likely written simply to appeal to readers – it could possibly be exaggerated, for entertainment’s, and the tone of the source itself – ‘war time business girl’, ‘the meal, of course,’ , ‘with money and without men’ – can, from another perspective be seen as somewhat mocking, suggesting that women are behaving differently, as opposed to progressed. Source B is also from a newspaper – this time a letter written in, by a women – and can be considered ...

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