Cookies experiment
Aim: To find out what type of powder reacts more towards heat and therefore expanding inside a cookie mix.
Prediction: Based on the research I maid I think that the powder with the least different type of carbohydrates and elements will be the one to heat up faster. When it heats up faster each grain expands much more making the cookie longer.
Method:
- Make the base cookie mix
- Using the same shape cutter cut 6 cookies from the cookie mix with similar attributes.
- Put in different containers a teaspoon of each of the following powders: sugar, coffee, cereal crumbs, chocolate milk powder and cinnamon.
- Put one cookie sized mixes into the container with sugar and make sure the sugar is inside the cookie mix.
- Repeat step 4 for each of the powders.
- Place all five cookies into the oven; add an extra cookie without any powder added to it.
- Measure each cookie's length in cm.
- Bake for 20 minutes at 200ºC.
- Measure the length of each cookie.
Materials:
- Metal and glass containers
- Cookie mix
- Ruler
- Oven
- Tea spoon
- 5 different powders (sugar, coffee, cereal crumbs, chocolate milk powder and cinnamon)
- Mold to cut cookie mix
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Quality of writing
The decimal places uses were consistent in the results which was good. Spelling and punctuation are fine with minor grammatical errors in places which makes the writing slightly harder to read but this does not detract from the meaning of the piece.
Level of analysis
The introduction is good and the candidate makes a prediction about what is going to happen, although the scientific reasoning behind this is not explained very well and I'm not sure what scientific use this experiment shows. The candidate uses controls which shows a higher level of thinking. The research the candidate puts into the experiment and the way it is explained is very clear and to a high level of understanding. The evaluation and conclusion could be a lot more rounded and thought out by considering other improvements and things that may have gone wrong with the experiment
Response to question
Overall a good piece. The essay shows a good depth of research and some reasoning of the scientific reasons behind the results and in predictions. The lack of a well rounded evaluation and conclusion are the only thing hurting this piece of work.