commentary - The purpose of this piece is to give an insight into charity shopping using my personal experience, giving an alternative to vintage shops, using tips on to what to expect and why the reader should try charity shopping .

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I'm writing to advise and inform.

The purpose of this piece is to give an insight into charity shopping using my personal experience, giving an alternative to vintage shops, using tips on to what to expect and why the reader should try charity shopping .

My audience is for people interested in fashion, shopping and mainly saving money this could appeal to anyone from 15 years of age to post university students who have small budgets. This links to the strategies I suggest of saving money and the repetition of the word bargain, 'bag a bargain'

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Also I mimicked the reassurance factor that is present in my style model, mixing this with information and included facts made my work convincing.

I used Auxiliary verbs such as could, might, may, should and can which emphasises my assistance making the advice I give to my reader gentle being more of a guide then in their face advice. I tried to make the reader feel as if all I was trying to do is help rather then persuade them to go charity shopping until the end where I used imperatves e.g. 'Venture in, do it!', 'you do ...

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