Write a comparison of these two proposal scenes, considering the authors' differing attitudes to love and marriage and the ways in which these are conveyed in these two passages.

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Write a comparison of these two proposal scenes, considering the authors’ differing attitudes to love and marriage and the ways in which these are conveyed in these two passages.

Passage a – Jane Eyre, by Charlotte Brontë

Passage b - Emma, by Jane Austen

The major theme within both passages is based upon love and marriage; however, the passage from Jane Eyre is far more passionate and spontaneous (‘he asked passionately’), as opposed to Emma, which tackles the subject of love in a more orderly fashion (‘plain, unaffected, gentleman-like’).

The introductions of the two passages represent different styles of writing: whereas the introduction of the passage from Emma is straight to the point and starts with dialogue, the passage from Jane Eyre begins with a short paragraph of description about the ‘wind’ and the ‘nightingale’. Moreover, the language used (‘a waft of wind’) creates an atmospheric sense of passion, further emphasised by the alliteration. More profoundly, nightingales are symbolic of sadness and love, whilst the wind is symbolic of passionate love (‘he ejaculated’, ‘added wildly’), both of which are themes explored within the novel, and in the passage itself, (through the language given in the examples).

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In addition, passion often coincides with spontaneity and hesitation in language, which is explored by Brontë on numerous occasions with the use of dashes (‘I would not – I could not – marry Miss Ingram. You – you strange – you almost unearthly thing! – I love as my own flesh. You – poor and obscure, and small and plain as you are –’). The broken sentences display how Mr Rochester is simply blurting out how he feels – very different to a normal, planned proposal; signified further by the way he describes Jane (‘unearthly’, ‘poor and obscure’.) By ...

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