Avalanche I was skiing down the slope at full speed trying to catch up with Kannan my only brother

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Suheelan Thayalaseelan

Avalanche

I was skiing down the slope at full speed trying to catch up with Kannan my only brother.  I then heard a tremendous yell from behind so I quickly skidded to a halt and looked back.  A few other people, just like me came to a halt and were looking back as well.  I turned around, saw Kannan fall and begin to tumble.  I was right in his path!

Quick as lightning I dug my ski poles into the ground and dived to the left behind a tree, this way I was saved at least a bit from the ‘snow spray’ he left behind him.  After he had tobogganed helplessly past on his back I got up and shook my clothes so the snow would fall off.  Kannan had only come to a standstill because the part he was on was a flat bit of land.  

Swiftly I went over to him to see if he had broken a bone or anything.  He was perfectly well, as he had worn protective clothing.  Just then both of us heard a distant rumble somewhere and looked back up the slope to try and identify the source.  

“AVALANCHE! Ski right down, no tree or cabin on the mountain is safe!” someone yelled.

Suddenly there was terror and panic all around me.  

“Keep calm.  Ski down Kannan.”  I yelled at the top of my voice, before turning and heading downhill.  Many others followed my determined lead.  I saw Kannan begin to ski.  Now, I told myself I should concentrate on my own safety as well as his and get to the bottom as quick as I could.  It really was like a slalom race but instead of weaving in and out of poles it was trees and other skiers.

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Soon I could hear the thunderous sound getting louder by the second.  Muffled cries were choked off as skiers fell under the avalanche.  I glanced back and what I saw was too scary to describe because it was like a wave of snow.  The snow crest was really high and it looked like it was eating the other skiers up.  Kannan was right behind me, his face pinched with fear.  This great tidal wave of snow was, bit by bit overtaking the skiers.  When I was one of only a small number still ahead I turned again to see ...

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