Creative Writing Coursework : The doorbell rings.

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Creative Writing Coursework : The doorbell rings.

"Who is it?" No answer.

It rings again. "Hello? Is there anyone there?" I ask as my motionless feet are glued to the ground, my heart starts pounding like a hard hit drum.

Still, no answer.

Then all of a sudden I feel a gush of wind push me towards the door, closer and closer I got, dragging my dead feet with me as I reached out for the doorknob.

I could hear the noises of thunder competing with the rain and the strong husky wind rattling the torn-down shed outside.

These noises were getting louder and louder.

The wind howling like a dying, starving fox which seemed to get closer and closer to me as if it was after my flesh.

I opened the door. No one there, 'oh it was probably some children being silly' I thought to myself as a fierce chill pierced my throat. I quickly forced the door shut and I hurried into the hallway.

I knew it wasn't 'silly children'. I knew I was building a brick wall between reality, and me. Deep down, in my sub-conscious I knew the truth, but I just didn't want to admit it. I had to try to keep us on different sides.
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"Ouch!" I shrieked as I ran to drown my smouldering wrist into cold water. My numb trembling hand couldn't take the weight of my cup as my mind was still on the daunting feeling I had experienced.

"Aarrggh, alright that's it!" I whispered to myself as I rushed to the bathroom eagerly hoping that a bath would ease my mind a little.

I sighed in relief as I slipped myself into the lukewarm water. I felt protected between the layers of water as it hugged my chest. I felt like I was a young baby ...

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