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Luke Garner    10Pd     English

Creative Writing Coursework: The trip I lost my heart

London. I still remember that day; it was October 11, 2009. My family including my parents, my three younger sisters, and I were going to leave England to come to the United States. I woke up about eight o'clock in the morning, enthralled at the prospect of moving to the United States. After breakfast, I got dressed and walked around to say goodbye to my neighbourhood. Most seemed very upset that we were leaving and a few started crying. I felt heartbroken and devastated that I was going to leave all the great memories behind and start afresh. Some of my neighbours wished me a good life and a better education, some told me keep in touch with them, and it was difficult to stop myself from crying.

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I then went back to my house. It was full of relatives and friends, I felt so happy seeing everyone together but I was grief stricken that it was the last time I was going to see everyone. They came to visit us for the last time and some of them would go with us to the airport.

 My girlfriend was inside; she was waiting for me. I met her one year ago and we fell in love after six months. When she knew I would leave, she was gob smacked, she hugged me and she cried and uttered the ...

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