Dreams and Fantasies in 1984 There is a reoccurring theme in the novel 1984, by George Orwell. The main character, Winston Smith is often fantasizing about his utopia, and dreaming about past events

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Dreams and Fantasies in 1984   There is a reoccurring theme in the novel 1984, by George Orwell. The main character, Winston Smith is often fantasizing about his utopia, and dreaming about past events. In a world where everyone is controlled and everything is decided for you, Winston relies on his subconscious mind to maintain his sanity.Winston works rewriting the past in a department for the Party. His memories of the past are usually the opposite of the Party's version of the past. Winston is very confused about whether or not he is losing his mind. His dreams reveal the reality of the Party and the truth of the past, enabling him to trust his own instinct of what is right and wrong, keeping it clear in his mind what the past was really like. In one dream Winston envisioned his mother and his baby sister sinking into a well or lowering off the side of a ship - he wasn't quite sure. He felt as if they were being sucked towards death.
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He knew they were sacrificing their lives for his own. Winston realizes "...that his mothers dhree of them. Winston, of course, demanded the whole piece. His mother responded by telling him not to be greedy. She gave him the majority of the piece and the rest to his little sister, but he stole it from her. She started to cry while Winston ran away with the chocolate. His mother held his baby sister in her arms, trying to console her. It did not produce more chocolate, but it was only natural for her to do it. His mother was an ...

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The Quality of Written Communication is very good. Through the essay the candidate has upheld the required standards of English writing, with an adept handling of spelling, grammar and punctuation. A wider range of punctuation could be useful in showing the candidate's ability to write with confidence and dexterity.

The Level of Analysis is good here. The candidate demonstrates an adept understanding of how to effectively analyse the text for Orwell's use of dreams in Winston's character, and also understands how the totalitarian oppression from The Party and Big Brother crushed these dreams, though there are missed opportunities to quote some of the most infamous quotes from the text, as they lend themselves very well to this answer - the quote that O'Brien says: "If you want an image of the future, imagine a boot stamping on a human face - forever". This kind of quote shows a full understanding of the novel and how to apply evidence from it into the answer. Examiners looks for this - candidate who can construct an analysis with appropriate evidence from the source text.

This essay is a response to a question that asks candidates to consider the dreams and fantasies of the protagonist of George Orwell's 'Nineteen Eighty-Four', Winston Smith. This answer shows a candidate capable of focusing extremely well on the proposed question, with little divergence if not to fortify the answer with an understanding of the book as a whole, identifying key points during the novel where Winston's imagination leads us to see his dreams and fantasies. It may have served the candidate better to consolidate all the comments about Winston's dreams of hope; of love; of freedom; of his family; of his memory in their own paragraph and link them via the means to which The Party destroy his chances of ever achieving such. This way, each paragraph covers a specific angle of dreaming that Orwell places in the text and will consistently refer directly to the question, and it shows the examiner that the candidate has the ability to effectively structure their answer to address all aspects that the question proposes. It will also save time as the candidates using this structure will not need to switch and change between points.