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Whang, came a meaty red fist right into my jaw, and then came the stench from the un-flushed toilet. There was blood dripping from my hands they’d left me groggy lying on the year 7s boy’s toilet floor. I picked myself up, lifted my   right hand and stroked my cheek, tried to stop the blood from staining my brand new shirt. I walked across to the toilet, lifted the toilet seat up then all I could see was what my English teacher would regard as a “stygian clump of feces lying there un-flushed”. I ran out of the filthiness and into the corridor where I could see a group of boys in the corner looking at me murderously; they exchanged eye contact with me as if I was a just a slug to be squashed.

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      Then while I limped down the corridor into the hallway before entering the lunch room, I encountered the thugs who wear the   cool clothes. Many times I had made an effort to be half as cool as they are, every single time ending in fiasco. Next when I passed the corridor leading to the drama hall, I exchanged angry looks with the three most troublesome boys, their rings shinning in my face, it was as though they’d blinded me.

       Further down the path I saw a load of kids playing on ...

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