Still I Rise vs I Too Sing America

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Black civil rights campaigner, Jesse Jackson, once said, “I am black and I am beautiful...so I must be respected.”  In their poems ‘Still I Rise’ and ‘I, too, Sing America’, Maya Angelou and Langston Hughes also illustrate the idea of celebrating black pride to overcome racism.  Through the use of metaphor, repetition and symbolism in their respective poems they show the reader the significance of the African American struggle for equality.

In ‘Still I Rise’, Maya Angelou illustrates how the black race are battling to overcome the racism and hardship of their past.  She employs the extended metaphor of the wave, “I’m a black ocean”, to show how the black race have been oppressed, just like a tide is pushed back; but they have come back stronger, like waves that crash back to the shore.  The rhyming line, “welling and swelling”, symbolises the “past that’s rooted in pain” of the black people – how they have been hurt, bruised and destroyed by the “hatefulness” expressed towards them, and the “swelling” of these bruises has still not fully faded.  Black history is “welling” over with tales of injustice – in The Hurricane, a true film directed by Norman Jewison, Rubin ‘Hurricane’ Carter was sentenced to 30 years imprisonment for a murder he didn’t commit just because of the colour of his skin, and there are many more victims of racism just like him.  Angelou concludes the wave metaphor with “I bear in the tide” to allow the reader to see that despite the black race being victims of slavery and racism, they are able to use their unique history to move forward in life to strive towards a more equal society.  Just like the wave metaphor, Rubin Carter overcomes the hatred shown towards him and eventually gains the ultimate reward for this, he achieves freedom.

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Angelou further reinforces the black race’s victory over racism through the repetition of the simple sentence “I rise” throughout the poem.  The repetition of this sentence emphasises that blacks are “leaving behind” the “terror” of their past.  The race as a whole is rising above the inferiority and discrimination they have faced to claim their own rights and identity.  The use of this simple sentence is elegant and direct making it powerfully reach out to the reader.  We are inspired to rise above our own fears and the prejudice that is present in our society today, because like the black ...

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An essay that shows a very strong understanding of the social and historical contexts that impacted both pieces of writing. A title with a specific reference to context would have been a good focus for this essay. In terms of analysis there needs to be more on structure and form and the consideration of these ideas alongside the contextual issues that are being explored. 4 Stars.