The trapped soul

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Edward Hill                                 The trapped soul        5/10/07

The trapped soul

A mist that covers everything has descended over the battlefields of Borodino; no longer are the sounds of war heard, the cries of injured men has stopped. A black shape starts to emerge from the grey smog, a lost trapped soul wandering the battlefield after this fateful afternoon. This figure of a ghost however is focused on one thing, finding his friend; he searches through the mist, but to no avail. The heavens are grey, the air is grey everything is grey. Accept for the battle colours of dead French soldiers and the half torn flags that are sinking into the bog, just like the heavy cannons and cavalry found.

 Some eighty thousand soldiers died that day in the battle; fifty thousand died defending Moscow buying time for the population of the capital to escape from Napoleons rule.

The bloodiest one-day battle in the Napoleonic wars started on a morning that was so tranquil, so beautiful that it’s hard to imagine the difference come the end of the day.  Not a soul stirred in the Russian camp, exhausted after their one hundred and ten kilometre walk from Moscow: A cockerel crowed in the distance, signalling the dawn of a new day. Dimitry a peasant soldier of the Tsar, woken by the gentle breeze that caressed his innocent face, the sunlight danced, dappled through the tree that had protected him from a midnight downpour. Dimitry was a lanky figure compared to his smaller grubbier friend even though they were of similar age. Mikhail looked as if he had a lot more life experience. Dimitry lay on his back gazing at the clouds in the blue morning sky imagining what glory lay ahead of him today, his and Mikhail’s first battle under the illustrious leadership of the Tsar. General Kutuzov declared that today would be a great victory for this army, the Tsar and for Russia. A decisive blow would halt and repel the French Forces, and then Russia will take its place as one of the most powerful nations on earth.

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The first shot fired from an artillery battery on the hill above Dimitry, it whizzed over his head and exploded in the distance. Then the frantic horn for mobilisation sounded as soldiers from all regiments scurried past. Dimitry kicked Mikhail in the shin “get up, get up, it’s started” Mikhail replied, “Alright, alright the war can wait for us”.

Dimitry ignored Mikhail, picked up both their riffles and ran off in search of ammunition.

The French artillery returning fire hastened the chaotic organisation of battle columns. Mikhail ran up the hill and watched the mechanical movement of ...

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