Transactional Writing - English

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Transactional Writing

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In the future, ABS is going to be rebuilt as part of Camden's "Building Schools for the Future" programme. The purpose of my report, which will be submitted to the Head teacher and the Schools governors, would be to recommend suggestions for the school's rebuilding with references to the buildings' layout, interior design and functions. "Building Schools for the Future" means that as more people come to the school, the school itself would have to change so everyone can benefit from it.

School buildings layout

The current building layout for the school, I think is that in some areas, there are more people than others. An example of this would be the bottom of Yellow Block and below the bridge where there is no access for students and is just empty space which has possibilities.
This space could be used for other things like a storage room or another classroom that doubles into a games room.  A games room could help provide a social link between teachers and students so that teachers can be seen more as a friend then as a teacher.

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The corridors are another issue with the current layout as people would have to squeeze through each other in these congested places in order to get to their lessons on time. Widening them to offer greater mobility would be a solution to the problem. These solutions are ways in which I think would improve students’ moods and help them to enjoy the day more (as well as teachers).

Classroom design and facilities

In the case of classrooms and facilities, there doesn't seem to be enough in the current layout, causing some lessons to be moved to places which would not suit ...

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