Fish Fish II.

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Fish Fish II

  “Squelch, squelch” Raymona’s wet boots hit the boggy grass. “Damn this cursed thing!” She shouted to herself as she cast a gaze at the long stretch of Amasonia River and felt a slight tinge of sorrow for Eddy.

  Eddy is (well was) Raymona’s pet eel. She had been with Eddy for two years now but ever since “ the accident” he was always frantic and stupid.

“Splash.”

“Bye Eddy.”

Eddy moved rapidly down the Amasonia River. From a world where food was hand fed into your lovely tank then suddenly thrown into a dark, musty, freezing river getting hit by strange hard and sharp objects. Eddy felt a sudden jolt to the left and

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“Slice.”

The sickening sound of warm fresh blood being sliced open on a putruding stalagmite like a neck on a freshly sharpened guillotine. The poor guy had just seen it a fraction too late, and then his world went black.

Eddy had seen the huge fish get sliced open but he on the other hand had hit the cold sticky dry mud that clung to his skin like a new-born does to its mother. The mud was also as crumbly as a new biscuit and it irritated him!

He wriggled, struggled and stretched but whatever he did he just ...

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