Describe the character of Lorna in muriel sparks short story, 'You should have seen the mess'.

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Jennifer Pinch         Humanities Access English, Glen McIver.        October 1, 2009

Describe the character of Lorna in Muriel Spark’s short story ‘You should have seen the mess’.  What would you say were her main characteristics?

Muriel Spark conveys a disconcertingly snobbish sense of humor in her short story, ‘You should have seen the mess’. She cleverly portrays this through the narrative of Lorna, who is a lower middle class girl who begins the story aged at seventeen.

The story starts with Lorna telling us that she is now glad that she didn’t pass the exam for grammar school. The main reason she gives is because the comprehensive she attended was cleaner.

‘I am glad that I went to the secondary modern school, because it was only constructed the year before.  Therefore it was much more hygienic than the grammar school.’

This gives us the first indication of her character, aside from giving us an idea of her naivety, and sense of denial it gives us the possibility that she is obsessed with cleanliness and order. At this point though I thought she must be clutching at straws and to hide her disappointment. As the story goes on however, her obsessive ideas about cleanliness dominate. Next she tells us about her first job, and the first description she gives is again regarding cleanliness.

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‘I must say that when I went for the interview, I was surprised that the windows and the stairs up to the offices were also far from clean’

She goes on to describe the cleanliness of the rooms, in an obsessive manner, even mentioning there were elements missing from the gas fire. The first thing she notices about anyone or any place is the cleanliness or wither they have a tidy appearance.

Lorna’s obsession for cleanliness gives us the first indication of her ignorance, although there are plenty of other examples. She is ignorant in both senses of ...

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