An Analysis of - The Darkness Out There

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Linda Zeta Gray  Prose 10th October 2005

“An analysis of The Darkness Out There”

by Penelope Lively

An Analysis of - The Darkness Out There

The title of this short story points towards the darkness around us and the darkness within our souls.  That place where even common decency flees from, a place we can often imagine doing bad things without any come back towards us but we rarely carry out.

The plot of this story on the surface is about 2 young people in Good Neighbour Club helping out an old dear who has a wonky leg and is living alone in a country cottage by the woods.  The description of the flowers, ox –eyed daisies and vetch and cow parsley describe a country setting and the area would be a small village near Clapton in Somerset.    

There are several themes within this short story this paragraph deals firstly with the theme of darkness and light it covers the darkness around us  In Packer’s End “ It was a rank place, all whippy saplings and brambles and a gully with a dumped mattress and a bedstead and an old fridge.  And, somewhere, presumably, the crumbling rusty scraps of metal and cloth and ….bones?”  This evokes a sense of desolation a hostile haunted kind of place, somewhere you don’t really want to be, nasty things could happen, this sets the mood of the woods also this was set in the past and the present, at one point the writer graphically describes the trees when the German plane went down, “The branch shapes to look like faces and clawed hands” and” You couldn’t quite see into, the clotted shifting depths of the place.”  This makes you kind of hold your breathe in anticipation wondering what will happen there, You know it is horrible from the descriptive words used.  It also tells you of the girl that was possibly sexually assaulted by knife wielding men so you know now it definitely isn’t the place for a young girl to be.          

The other aspect of Darkness covered in this story is the darkness of badness, evil, human wickedness, vengeance which is never a pretty thing.  The dark blot on Mrs Rutter’s soul for leaving that poor man to die, obviously drawn out over several days so no doubt a painful, lonely death and he was a mere boy really barely reaching manhood about 20 yrs old, but she saw it as ok,  she “Licked her lips” she enjoyed the telling and probably enjoyed causing that pain to the boy, it was simply vengeance an eye for an eye, the Germans killed her husband and ruined her life and the life she no doubt had planned out in her mind, so she had no qualms in letting this poor young lad die.  She could have done the Christian (good) thing and helped him but she was beyond caring she wasn’t “Squeamish”.  This part of the story deals in the past and the language used was very negative.

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Another theme would be youth and age, youth represented by Kerry and Sandra and age represented both by Mrs Rutter and briefly by Pat who ran the club.  Although Pat is a lot younger than Mrs Rutter as she calls her a “Dear old thing”.  Mrs Rutter looks like a sweet old lady “composed of circles, a cottage-loaf of a woman, with a face below which chins collapsed one into another, the author uses a metaphor to describe her face  comparing her face to a pool “A creamy smiling pool of a face in which her eyes snapped and darted”, ...

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