Comparing and contrasting features of 5 short stories.

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MURRAY FULFORD 1107

COMPARING/CONTRASTING 5 SHORT STORIES ESSAY

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Comparing and contrasting features of 5 short stories

The stories that are going to be compared are; The Monkey’s Paw – W.W. Jacobs, The Signalman – Charles Dickens, The Red Room – H.G. Wells, The Murders in the Rue Morgue – Sir Thomas Browne and The Speckled Band: Sherlock Holmes Stories – Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. These are all short stories written at around the same period as each other, yet they have some very different features; in the language used, the way in which tension is built, the point at which the tension is climaxed, the narratorial style and how the writer keeps the reader’s attention throughout the story but especially towards the beginning. I am going to investigate the effectiveness of the various features.

Initially The Monkey’s Paw beings with a descriptive paragraph about the surroundings and the mood within the home the story is set in. It begins with a slight feeling of tension, as the weather is described to be, ‘cold and wet’ which is usually associated with ghost-type stories but this tension is immediately released with the ‘but’ and the contrast between the external conditions and the warmth and ease within Laburnam Villa – where ‘the blinds were drawn and the fire burned brightly. The first characters introduced are the father and son who are playing an unobtrusive game of chess which links in with the atmosphere created. The game of chess is played with a certain amount of determination to win and so a relationship is created between father and son. This is clever in the fact that it makes the reader able to relate to the situation and it means that the scene is set for the coming events to take place. As the story continues and the mother is introduced there is a sense of normality within the family, as though nothing out-of-the-ordinary ever happens to them. This helps build up the twist in the story and throws the reader off guard to what happens later on. The fact that the narrator is unnamed and not of any significance to the story helps the reader have a clear picture of what is going on during the entirety of the happenings and allows the author to switch from one scene to another without any awkward interventions. It also gives an un-opinionated view on what is happening and leaves room for a sub-plot that the author wants to put across. As the main plot gets underway a tension begins again. Instead of a soothing atmosphere, created by words mentions previously, the calm is suddenly broken by Mr White’s dramatic outburst involving harsh words – ‘of all the beastly, slushy, out-of-the-way places to live in, this is the worst’ – and violent actions. This is followed by the arrival of a Sergeant-Major Morris, who seems extremely out of place among ordinary citizens with his official status and on look. He brings about a whole new feel among the characters, where as before the mood was clear and relatively calm; now there is an air of suspicion, expectancy and anxiety among everybody in the room. There is also a conveyed feeling of superiority about the Sergeant-Major with him taking the ‘proffered seat by the fire’ and so a greater tension is created as the reader wants to find out what this man of importance is doing at a typical household and what he may have to offer. With the title being The Monkey’s Paw the reader wonders whether he is in possession of this item, if it is indeed real. There is also a sense of realism about the Sergeant-Major as when Mr White mentions his want to go to India he says, typically of the time for upper-class citizens – ‘Better where you are’ – as a semi-racist comment. It is then that the Monkey’s Paw is introduced. A feeling of mystery surrounds it as when asked about the Paw Morris is very reluctant to discuss it and when he does so it is very off-handedly at first. But, under interested pressure from the family, he begins to tell the story of the Paw in a very realistic fashion. There is also an impression that Morris is scared of the power of the Paw to grant the three wishes as when he replies, ‘I have,’ to Mr White’s question, of why he hasn’t had his three wishes, his face whitens and he replies quietly. After further discussion about the Paw the Sergeant-major suddenly throws it onto the fire – to destroy it and its power. But, with typical human nature of greed and wonder to things strange, Mr White promptly takes it back. This is the beginning of the real tale that the White’s go through. The Sergeant leaves Mr White with a final warning. The tension at this point is at its climax for the current scene, but is released as soon as the friends sit around the table ‘listening in an enthralled fashion to a second instalment of the soldier’s adventures in India.’ But, in Mr White’s sceptical view on things, he believes both the tale of India and the Paw to be untrue and airs this opinion as soon as the Sergeant is gone. This leaves the reader in an unsure state of mind about the significance of the Paw and what is may represent as there are contradicting opinions of the Paw – one coming directly from someone who has had first hand experience of its power, the other coming from a seemingly ignorant man who is scared to believe in magic. But, contrary to this he tries out a wish in which he asks for two hundred pounds. There is a crash from the piano which makes the reader almost jump and certainly influences the characters into believing the power of the paw in null. This is probably because, due to human nature, they do not want to have a power greater than their own as it creates a figure in which fate is undetermined and a danger is created. The father also feels the Paw twitch in his hand – ‘as I wished it twisted in my hands like a snake’ – and animalism is used to give the reader a picture of what the Paw did. But, yet again, human nature comes into play to stop him and those around him believing him and it is put down to his ‘fancy.’ The fact that the money does not instantly appear leaves the characters in no doubt that the Paw does not have any powers whatsoever. The son even goes as far as to make jokes about the initial belief in the Paw and so all tension is released. The next morning, however, the Paw is still fresh in their minds, and as much as they want to believe in it for the money it could bring them, as the money has still not appeared they have absolutely no real belief in its powers with Herbert – the son – making jokes about it ‘dropping on his head from the sky’ which leaves a happy feeling as he leaves the house for work. But, during a conversation between the mother and father a new mystery is created in a man that is walking up and down their street peering into their house a number of times before moving on until eventually he is brought into the house under apologies of the state of it from the mother. This man is well-dressed and has a sense of authority about him and when he reveals he is from Maw and Meggins – the company their son works for – a great tension is created and built up as the conversation between all three of them begins. The tension continues as far as possible with the mother not accepting or even realising the fate of her son until the very last moment. This brings a whole new light onto the story and the Paw – with the reader wondering if it had anything to do with the wish for 200 pounds made earlier on. The representative continues, saying that although the company accepts no responsibility for the death they will give the family 200 pounds for the work that the son did for the company. With the ignorance to the fact of the Paw of the representative, the shriek from the mother and the father fainting at this announcement the tension is released but leaves in its place an uncertainty of the Paws power. It is quickly realised that the characters suddenly have a newfound belief in the power and are scared of its outcome – which is exactly as the Sergeant-Major described. This makes the feeling between the characters tense and almost angry, especially when the mother wants to use the Paw again – to bring her son back. The father is immediately shaken and angry at his wife for even suggesting this, with the previous outcome being terrible for the both of them, saying, ‘get back to bed. You don’t know what you are saying.’ But against the wishes of the husband the old woman insists on his wishing for their son to be back. With the wish granted after fierce words from the mother the tension is created again, leaving an air of uncertainty once they go to bed – the wish not granted. The question is left in the readers mind – was it coincidence or does the Paw really have the power it is said to? The writer continues in leaving the tension by keeping the characters awake in bed listening to the sounds around them and feeling literally oppressed by the darkness around them. The father goes down to light a candle and lights a match which promptly goes out followed by a knock on the door. The match going out could have been symbolic of what was about to happen. The ‘scarcely audible’ knock leaves the reader and characters frightened of what lies behind the closed door. The character flees upstairs but, with his ever hopeful wife hearing the knock he has to get to the door first to stop her from opening it. There is a struggle in which the father is revealed as a scared character – he is scared of the power of the Paw, his son and the optimism of his wife – whereas the wife is an optimist, wanting her son to be alive yet not believing in the side effects of the Paw. The father makes a final wish which is not revealed to the reader so as to leave way to finality of the story and subplot and the door is opened to nothing. The subplot is a lesson to people – that what is right should not succumb to human nature, namely greed as it will leave you wanting more, no matter what the side-effects to you or others are.

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The Red Room by H.G. Wells is another tale with a subplot which is a lesson to the reader but told in a different way, in the fact that the narrator is the main character. In this story a young man has decided to stay in a supposedly haunted room in a home inhabited by 3 old people who believe in the ghost and its terror, but he does not accept the existence of spirits even with the warnings from the old people. The atmosphere is immediately tense from the very beginning with the first character described as having ...

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