creative writing."HELP!" she shrieked. The shadow was growing. Was she being followed, in the dark, 17th century mansion

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“HELP!” she shrieked. The shadow was growing. Was she being followed, in the dark, 17th century mansion? Were the rumours of the town being haunted true? These were some of the thoughts Simran was going through, in her rather confused head. Silence, darkness and a smell of fear surrounded the rather chubby figure of Simran, in the long unusual corridor. She could hear every step she made, and every breath she took. Simran was terrified of what might be behind her. She didn’t have the courage to look back. Sweat was dripping down her face, like tear drops. Simran felt as if she was being chased by a snake, in the hot and humid, Sahara desert. “AaHH!”  Simran screamed, at the top of her voice. There was a long echo. What had made the normally, ice cold, Simran (known as Sim by her friends) scream like that?

They were driving the car, towards Delhi airport, on a bumpy Indian, countryside road. The newly wed couple felt as if they were on an African camel, going up and down more times then a yoyo.

“How long is it going to take?” Simran politely asked Gurdeep.

“Can’t you keep your mouth shut for once?” Gurdeep fumed.

 

“I’m sorry Gurpz, can you try not to shout at me next time. I know I’m a stupid little cow, but it’s not my fault.”  Simran kindly replied.

Gurpz (Gurdeep’s nickname) gave an evil frown towards Sim. Simran and Gurpz had come to India as a couple, but that had all changed, when Gurdeep, who was 6ft 2” tall, thought Simran, who was 5ft 7” tall, was flirting with an Indian waiter. It was just Simran, who had long black hair, being friendly as usual. But Gurdeep, who had short black hair, didn’t see it in that way.

“Get Out, Leave, Right now, It's the end of you and me

It’s too late, now, and I can’t wait

For you to be gone

Cuz I know about her and

I wonder, why, how I brought all the lies

You said that you would treat me right

But you were just a waste of time”

This was the song that was being played on the radio. The song broke the awkward silence in the old rusty red car.

 “Why? Why? Did you have to ruin it all?” Gurdeep queried in an unusually soft tone.

 “I didn’t do anything, you have to believe me Gurpz, I’m so sorry if I ever hurt you.” Simran pleaded, looking deep into Gurdeep’s eyes, which were, remarkably, not looking as heartless as they usually do.

 “Weren’t we good together?” Gurdeep asked. “Wasn’t I good enough for you?” Gurdeep queried, in a soft tone, moving closer towards Simran.

 “It’s nothing like th...” Simran was interrupted by Gurdeep.

 “Then why did you do all this, why did you wreck our relationship? I loved you; didn’t that mean anything to you? Simran calmly explained, knowing that Gurdeep was getting reminders of his previous marriage.

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“I am not like Harpreet, what she did was disgraceful. I am not having an affair, and I most certainly do not want your money. I am with you because I love you. Can you remember when I saw you in that state and you told me all about it; it was love at first sight for me. I will not shoot you and leave you to die. I did, and I still do-I love you. Can’t we forget about what’s happened? Can’t we get back to how we were befor...?” Simran explained in vain. Gurdeep raged.

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