Dual Narrative Short Story

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Dual Narrative Short Story       

A beam of dazzling light glanced off the majestic buildings, dancing lightly across the paved surface of the square. Michael stared. So many colours! So many people! He didn’t know where to turn, where to look next. Eager eyes roved restlessly across the crowds, drinking in the colourful chaos like a cat lapping up cream.

   “C’mon love, we can’t stand here staring forever. There’s plenty more things to see in Venice.”

   Michael reluctantly dragged his eyes away from the floods of tourists streaming continuously across St. Mark’s square, and turned to face his mother. Mrs Kay stood, hands on hips, face crumpled in to a motherly frown, just a few meters away. Michael hurried to catch up with his mum, and she dutifully lectured her son as they crossed the square. Then they entered the backstreets.

   “Now remember, stick by me and try not to wander off. Venice is like a huge maze. It’s easy to get lost here…”

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   It was dark and cold in the shadow of the church. A pile of rags and newspaper and human flesh lay slumped against the wall. The distant hum of the tourists flooding St. Mark’s square was the only sound to be heard. The heap by the wall opened a lazy blood-shot eye and surveyed the scene silently, picking out the only people occupying the square: A fat-cat business man striding along, with an equally fat wallet sticking out, oh-so-temptingly, from his jacket pocket; a little girl wandering across the street, ice cream clutched in one tiny hand- a crisp bank note in the other; and a thin lady with an expensive-looking handbag.

Join now!

  The man stood up from his pile of cloth and paper and locked his eyes hungrily on the little girl.

“Wow!”

Michael’s jaw dropped in wonder. His eyes feasted on a gloriously colourful mask, hanging resplendent in a grubby shop window. He pressed his nose against the window pane and inspected the mask a little closer. Gold leaf horns… glittering blue gems… a gaping mouth, open in an almost mocking smile. Michael breathed out slowly. He had to have that mask.

  “Mum..?”

Michael turned around, ready to plead for the first souvenir of the holiday. But his mum ...

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