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 Original Writing                                                        October 2006

‘Alone’

    Slowly, Rachel tapped the door open. Standing on the threshold together, they gazed at the gloomy room. It was half empty. By the sofa stood an ancient grandfather’s clock, without the pendulum inside. A grand piano was situated at the side of it, though the white piano keys were covered with layers of ash residues on top and a dead rat’s eye rested underneath the keys. Although it was not the best, they were still grateful they had found a place to stay in just for the night.

     “Knock, knock,” Rachel called. “Is anyone in here?” There was no reply.

     Rachel moved into the kitchen whereas Sarah decided to have a saunter around upstairs on her own. The floorboards creaked as she climbed cautiously up the spiral staircase to the landing. Carefully, feeling her way in the dark, she approached the bedroom. On the wooden table was a filthy vase containing carnations that had withered and shrivelled away. Lazily, she shuffled to the French window overlooking the garden, though it was not a very pleasing view. Using her damp coat, she wiped the dust from the window pane and, as she did so, a soft, shaky whisper sounded from behind.

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     “Hello?” she said in a quiet voice, but no one answered.

     Solid black clouds had filled the sky and huge drops of rain were pouring down harder than ever. The wind was steadily getting stronger and leaves on the top branches of the trees swirling rhythmically, rising and falling. Without warning, the scene outside was illuminated by a sharp flash of lightning. Instantly, she bounced back and dropped heavily onto the creaking floorboards. Soon after, something caught the side of her eye.

     Hanging on the wall, which had dull, tattered wallpaper, was a tarnished ...

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