I do not think that I am healthy because I love to eat ice cream and crisps. However, I think that I am healthier than when I was younger because I used to eat a lot of chocolate and drink too much coke but now I drink milk twice a day.
I try to eat healthy meals for dinner, I like to eat chicken and fish which contain a lot of protein and I normally have vegetables with them. For breakfast I try to eat toast and drink milk but sometimes I eat chocolate biscuits in the morning, this is bad because they are very sugary and I should not eat too much.
I stopped exercising when I started high school, I used to be very active and I was in many sports teams but when I was fourteen years old I had to stop. I used to be in a dance group, we practiced twice a week and performed once every four months, this was good for my health because I was able to exercise for two hours each session which helped to keep my heart strong. I also played football with my friends a lot when I was younger but I do not play anymore and I would not like to in the future.
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