French controlled assessment - food and health.

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I do not think that I am healthy because I love to eat ice cream and crisps. However, I think that I am healthier than when I was younger because I used to eat a lot of chocolate and drink too much coke but now I drink milk twice a day.

I try to eat healthy meals for dinner, I like to eat chicken and fish which contain a lot of protein and I normally have vegetables with them. For breakfast I try to eat toast and drink milk but sometimes I eat chocolate biscuits in the morning, this is bad because they are very sugary and I should not eat too much.

I stopped exercising when I started high school, I used to be very active and I was in many sports teams but when I was fourteen years old I had to stop. I used to be in a dance group, we practiced twice a week and performed once every four months, this was good for my health because I was able to exercise for two hours each session which helped to keep my heart strong. I also played football with my friends a lot when I was younger but I do not play anymore and I would not like to in the future.

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However I will try to exercise more, I would like to start dancing and I would also like to go walking. I like to walk and I occasionally make my friends walk around Leeds with me but I do not like running therefore I will never go running or jogging.

There are lots of things I could do to keep healthy such as, exercising more, however I cannot do this a lot because I do not have free time. I stopped dancing because I had too much homework to do and I preferred to watch the television at home.

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This is a 5 star piece of work. The writer uses a variety of tenses confidently, a range of topic-specific vocabulary and a variety of structures. There is a good range of conjunctions used to connect sentences together and opinions and reasons are given. In order to improve this piece of work, the writer could use more structures such as 'apr