Year 10 French Coursework Final (315 Words)
- What do you do to keep fit apart from your sport? (48 words)
Normalement, Je m’entraîne au moins deux fois par semaine pour rester en forme. Aussi, Je marche toujours pour aller au collège, car j’habite tout près. Je faisais de la natation toutes les semaines avant, tandis que maintenant, je vais à la piscine une fois par mois.
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This is a 5 star piece of work. The writer uses 5 different tenses, a good variety of verbs and vocabulary and some complex structures. The text flows very well, and the writer uses a good selection of connectives to link sentences together. Vocabulary is topic-specific and there are a sufficient number of opinions expressed. In order to improve this piece of work, the writer could include more examples of the future and conditional tenses.