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Quality of writing
I don't think the abstract should be labelled in yellow as whilst this is a good addition to the essay as it tells the reader everything before starting like a good presentation should, the colour is very loud. Spelling, grammar and punctuation to a good standard.
Level of analysis
The introduction repeats the abstract so I am not sure an abstract is particularly important in this instance for such a short essay but it is good to get an overview of the topic. The properties of nickel are not discussed as extensively as they should and their alloys before delving into uses as this would have given light on why the nickel is used in such an instance. The nickel properties have been discussed in some details in later paragraphs but I feel this should have come before and should have been related to the uses more thoroughly
Response to question
The response to the question is done reasonably well. The candidate introduces the concept of nickel but I believe the elements and the alloy forms should have been outlined in more detail to gain a better understanding of the metal. The uses and properties are outlined in good depth, but the structure should be played with as stated below.