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Andrew Cockroft

GCSE Coursework – Room 101

In Room 101 these are the 5 things I would put in it:

  1. Cigarettes
  2. Cancer
  3. Racism
  4. Nightmares
  5. Sleeping

I would put these things in Room 101 because I believe that the world would be a better place without them. Most of these items are detrimental to life and personal health and are totally unnecessary.

What would the world be like without cigarettes? Fewer deaths? Cleaner air? Poorer Governments?

I find Cigarettes a money making killer for the government. Out of every 20 pack of cigarettes 81% of the price paid for them is tax which is money that goes towards government funds. The government claim they make the taxation of these goods so high to put consumers off buying cigarettes, but my opinion is that the government want consumers to buy cigarettes and tobacco to bring in more money for government expenditure. In addition, personally I find smoking a disgusting habit; to be around someone that is smoking or has being smoking is horrible. The smell clings to where ever you go, your breath smells, your clothes smell and it makes other people around you smell. Furthermore the health risks to you and others when smoking is endless. The chemicals that you inhale when you smoke does chronic damage to your body, it gives you lung disease and numerous risks to your heart and other vital organs.

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What would the world be like without cancer? Fewer deaths? Cheaper NHS? More pain free lives?

Cancer is a very insidious disease. It creeps up on you, it may stay in your body for a while, but when you eventually find it, it maybe too late. Unfortunately before I was born I lost my grandma to pancreatic cancer. Pancreatic cancer is a malignant tumour that forms on the pancreas, the prognosis of pancreatic cancer is regarded as very poor, with less then 5% of the carriers living more than 5 years with the disease. Moreover it is usually secondary ...

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