The pompous tone of his letter incurs Elizabeth to ask the question “Can he be a sensible man?” Her father responds with “I have great hopes of finding him quite the reverse.” Mr Bennet relishes the opportunity to mock Mr Collins, who is a ridiculous character. Mr Collins’ awkward formality and constant compliments (about their home and the daughters) makes sure that the reader perceives him as a figure of fun.
In chapter 14 the reader can clearly see that his favourite topic of conversation is Lady Catherine: “Mr Collins was eloquent in her praise.” Through his praise of her, the reader can gather that she is interfering and over-bearing (this is confirmed later in the text): “She had even condescended to advise him to marry as soon as he could, provide he chose with discretion.” Also, he continuously contradicts himself. He states that Miss de Borough is far superior to the handsomest of her sex. He then points out that “she is unfortunately of a sick constitution.” Generally, those people who are ill and “sickly” could hardly be described as beautiful.
In chapter 15, he decides to marry one of the Bennet girls because it is difficult for them to refuse because of their financial position. This shows that he is very shallow and superficial.
In chapter 19, the pomposity of Mr Collins is revealed – he purposes to Elizabeth. Mr Collin’s words would suggest he loves her but in actual fact Lady Catherine told him to marry and there is a lack of romance in his reasons. His feelings for her are an after thought rather than a reason for marrying her. Elizabeth is incredulous. He is a very frustrating character and he does not listen to others.
Mr Collins is very shallow - he purposes to Charlotte after a very short space of time – he wants a wife not a companion. There are no thoughts of feeling or sentiment in his choice.
Mr Collins is presented as being “…a mixture of pride and obsequiousness, self-importance and humility.” In other words, Austen presents him as a character who thinks that he is benevolent, but in reality he is condescending.