MacCaig continues to express his pessimism towards New York’s society by highlighting the nature of the city, he shows this through his description of the night, “it’s uncivilised darkness”. The poet’s singles out the word “uncivilised” to emphasises the citizen’s primative behaviour and lack of control. This also creates the impression that they are like animals. MacCaig uses an extended metaphor which links back to the image of the people being uncivilised and violent towards each other. He uses the expression “wildest of warwhoops” to emphasises his hopelessness towards society as the quote relates to war, and the residents of New York being untamed, creating connotations of a chaotic Wild West. By conveying how despondent he feels about the state of society, the writer helps the reader to understand that the situation is a lot worse than you would think it was. The comparison to the wild west is effective as you get the feeling that things are out of control in the city.
The poet’s pessimistic attitude towards New York is made clear from the beginning when he brands the empire state building as a “jumbo size dentist’s drill”. MacCaig uses a metaphor to describe the buildings structure, as well as to create connotations of pain and suffering. The poet is irritated that millions of dollars are being spent on buildings, rather than helping all of the underprivileged residents of the city. He implies that the materialistic attitude of the rich, and their lack of support for the poor, is the cause of a great divide and much tension in the city. He is also verbally attacking the great structures and buildings of New York, having a go at them for wasting money when it should be spent on helping out the people. This is another point that MacCaig makes which is very true as if the big wigs of New York society use these overly large buildings to hide the poor and suffering of New York behind.
The way in which the poet end the poem I stanza three is very effective. It again relates back to the earlier Wild West theme, when MacCaig mentions that “the frontier is never somewhere else”, the poet’s use of the word “frontier” re-establishes the idea of New York being like a war zone. Mentioning that the war front isn’t elsewhere helps the reader to understand that it’s everywhere and that the violence isn’t just in New York but is wide spread, happening across the globe. Through this the poet emphasises on the negativity in the poem as the reader realises that there is crime, violence and a lack of care all over the world. The pessimism continues when the author writes, “ …no stockades can keep the midnight out”. Here MacCaig is telling the reader that the darkness and evil within people cannot be blocked off. This also helps the reader to understand that the world is no more civilized than it used to be, reinforcing the despairing attitude that MacCaig created. To me the poet has a very good point as no matter what you do there will always be violence. Most famous figures that have spoken out about peace in the world and equality such as John Lennon, Dr. King, Ghandi, so on… have all ended up being assassinated.
At the end of reading Norman MacCaig’s “Hotel Room, 12th Floor” my understanding of New York society has changed as I can now view it from the poet’s stance. Although the poem is quite drab and down beat you can understand why he feel this way and he clearly points out why. The city’s violence and lack of care is something that has to be tackled and sorted out, though the poet feel that due to the nature of the people this is unlikely to happen. The poet very effectively conveys his pessimistic attitude through his use of imagery making this poem a very good piece of literature.
