Creative Writing Coursework : The Game

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        Graham Russell

Creative Writing Coursework : The Game

She had long blonde hair; rectangular, sophisticated, black framed glasses that obstruct her beautiful, bright blue eyes, clear as crystal. Jane was wearing a long, tan coloured coat, with woolly, fibrous and white material covering the edges of the coat. Her tightly fitting trousers compliment her pristine white shirt. The briefcase being held in her left hand had the combination ‘1375’ her character’s birthday, 1-3-75. The objective of this particular game was to protect the briefcase, before it got to the main office where it would then be beyond her finite control.

There was only one other person on this single, lonesome platform. Jane thinks he was around forty; he was dressed as what people from this time would call a ‘tramp’. Was that Ben or was he just another character? Maybe he would turn up later?

Suddenly, unexpectedly a freight train sounded its foghorn and drew nearer and nearer to the station at an incredible speed. Reverberating and rumbling through the station, what was this? The train had people clinging on to the roof for their lives! This was either a major glitch in the program or its just the boss having his fun as usual, he had a weird sense of humour.

A few minutes later Jane hears a crackling noise coming from small, circular grids in the station’s old, mucky roof.

”The nine-twenty train from Penzance to New London will be arriving at platform 2 in fifteen minutes, it was running two minutes early, thank you.”

Jane was not used to it being so loud, she jumped, and then a gentle, soft and warm breeze flowing through the station soon calms her down. Jane’s train was drawing up to the platform. As she was getting onto the train she catches a glimpse of the boss lying in a pool of blood alone in the testing room! This particular screen should have displayed the forthcoming train times! What was wrong, maybe another glitch or the boss was trying to get me worried? As the doors closed the image cuts out and the train speeds away.

The other people on the train journey were very inanimate, not saying or doing anything; this was partly due to the D.D.R (digital drive recorder) not being up to scratch (it was probably too hot) that would have accounted for the last train glitch.

Half an hour later, Jane was about to helplessly fall into a deep sleep she then saw a vague silhouette of a person coming towards her! Jane could not help herself and carried on sleeping. The mysterious person tapped her on the shoulder.

“Aaahhh!” Jane screamed. She awoke from her short-lived moment of sleep. She cautiously opened her eyes, fearing the worst! As the light of the warm summer sun filtered into her eyes, she realises that Ben was the mysterious figure! It was Ben’s first time in a game and he had become a little lost until his character took over and had now led him to the train Jane was on.

Join now!

Ben had been coaxed into trying the game by Jane to provide his opinion on this game. The game was designed and made by Jane; it was due for release in a month’s time in the U.S. The market for these types of games was rapidly increasing and Jane stands to earn a lot of money and credit for the work she had put into this game.

“What are you doing here Ben?” questioned Jane as if she didn’t know. She designed the game for goodness sake, but because she is in the game it takes over ...

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