Lord of the Flies appears to be, a somewhat ill natured story about little boys isolated on an island - In reality it is a horrible story about the general characteristics and feelings of mankind.

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Year 10 English- Assessment Task 2003

LORD OF THE FLIES ESSAY

By Lynsey Bramley!

Lord of the Flies appears to be, a somewhat ill natured story about little boys isolated on an island. In reality it is a horrible story about the general characteristics and feelings of mankind.

Being stranded on an island is a situation that can have a severe physical and mental impact on those involved. As the boy’s on the island discover, such a situation can lead to their true selves breaking out from beneath their childish exteriors.

Destruction, fear, death, authority and order are some of the themes William Golding presents us with; these themes will be discussed in this essay.

In Lord of the Flies part of the nasty story is the destruction of order and the abuse of authority. When all the boys meets together in chapter 2, there is at first an agreement to order the island with a democratic system, and this is first represented by the ‘conch’, which is in effect the symbol for democracy on the island. “ I’ll give the conch to the next person to speak. He can hold it when he’s speaking.”(p.45) The whole system of democracy begins to fail early on in the book, Jack’s stubbornness to cooperate is the main cause of this, he hunts on his own and takes away many of the boys from democracy.“ All at once the crowd swayed towards the island and were gone following Jack.”(p.49)

Most of the boys don’t play their part in the democratic society as “They’re off bathing, or eating, or playing.”(p.    ) Ralph makes meetings and everyone talks and makes decisions, but very rarely are these ideas actually put into action.

Initially there is some conflict between Ralph and Jack, but this is just a struggle of ego’s not necessarily showing any kind of savagery, but as the novel progresses Jack insists on dictatorship, he breaks the rules frequently and likes to control the group and not hear others views. Jack goes on to say, “Bollocks to the rules…”(p.114)

This quote shows the boys are getting tired of the rules and the idea of civilisation is abandoned.

Eventually Jack breaks away from the group and forms his own, who are complete savages and only seek to cause destruction upon the island. He becomes a tribal chief, dressing up as an ‘idol’. The move from Democracy to dictatorship is shown through tribal dancing, chanting, feasting, and disregard for the littluns.

Jack uses his hunting power against the boys by bribing them with the fact that he is the one that provides them with meat, but as well as providing it, he also has the power to deny them of it, “Jack meant to refuse meat as an assertion of power…”(p.92) Jack unfairly teases the boys with the power he has over them, but eventually he always seems to give into them. By doing this, the boys respect him, but he also expects them to remain forever grateful for his offering. Bribing them to become a member of his society, with questions like, “ Who’ll join my tribe and have fun?”(p.186) Jack is offering fun and excitement, while Ralph is still trying to remind them of and grasp of their old democratic society. Sadly the rest of the boys do not possess enough courage to stand up for their rights and for what they believe in, they cowardly decide to leave Ralph’s group.

The conch loses power throughout the book, mainly because of Jack manipulating its purpose of rules. For instance he says that the conch doesn’t count on top of the mountain and eventually it is destroyed in the fight between the two tribes.

Through these events, Golding proves to us that it is a nasty story but he also wants us to read more into his novel and realise it does go deeper.

Not only does the destruction of order and the abuse of authority appear in the novel, but it is also present in today’s society.

William Golding had witnessed the effects of WW2; he had seen what evil on a large scale could achieve. Jack’s character rules by fear, he abuses his power and uses the boys’ fear to get them on his side. Jack’s personality and the way in which he gets to power is similar to Hitler. In WW2 Hitler used his power and the fear of the German people to create enough anger to go and get what was taken from them in WW1. In Lord of the Flies, the littluns are terrified of the beast and Jack uses their fear of the beast to get them on his side. Jack abuses the power he has over the boy’s to take them away from democracy and order, by saying things like “Bollocks to the rules! We’re strong- we hunt! If there’s a beast we’ll hunt it down! We’ll close in and beat and beat and beat”(p.114), changes the way the boy’s choose to deal with their fears of the beast. The ‘littluns’ feel protected with Jack because they believe he has the power to stop the beast, and the excitement made them forget their fear. Both Jack and Hitler are dictators. Lord of the Flies is evil on a small scale whereas WW2 was on a large scale, but they both show how when one person breaks out from their civilised barrier, it encourages the people that look up to them for guidance to do the same thing. Another example of this would be in schools. The eldest in the school are not only there for themselves but also to set a good example for the people that look up to them and for the people that are inspired by what they do. Some might take advantage of this power and use it to do evil, much like Jack who, in the novel is the character Golding uses to show that the destruction of order and the abuse of authority is relevant to the world today.

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Another point showing this repulsive story is the creation of fear that lies within the boys.

William Golding uses symbolism throughout the story to represent some of the non-physical aspects of the boys’ fears on the island. “ If your hunting sometimes…you can feel as if you’re not hunting, but- being hunted, as if something’s behind you all the time in the jungle.”(p.    ) This of course refers to the beast. The beast, although initially a physical symbol, actually represents the evil that resides within man. The children are all aware that such a beast exists, but none ...

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