original writing- mad on football Donna liked playing football at diner time because she was the only girl playing and because she was so good she could laugh at the lads

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GCSE Original Writing Coursework

By Mark Staniland

Donna was racing down the right wing, nothing could stop her she calmly went past another defender and put a wicked cross into the box, Liam Ridgeway jumped for the ball…Goal!. Donna liked playing football at diner time because she was the only girl playing and because she was so good she could laugh at the lads as stereotypical lads always think they’re better at football than girls.

After diner, Donna had maths. She was so gifted at this subject she never worried about the work, she would sit for a whole hour drawing tactics and plays out that the school team could use drawing their matches.

The bell rang at four o'clock and all the children in Donna's class at Chapel High School poured out into the corridor and joined the masses rushing out of school because it was Friday and the weekend was here!

Donna picked up her bag and went down to the gym. Tonight was football practice night and tomorrow there was a big match – the semi-final of the Inter-schools competition. Donna got changed and went out to the football pitch. A crowd of boys was hanging around the field, waiting for Mr Jones the sports teacher to arrive.

They kicked the ball around and practised shots on goal. They had a really good goalie called Warren. He looked like a stick insect with red hair and freckles, but he was brilliant at stopping goals.

Barry Woodhead was the centre forward. He was wicked at scoring penalties. Donna thought he must have studied videos of Michael Owen. If only Barry wasn’t so big-headed. Of course he was bigger and stronger and faster than everyone else but that didn't give him a reason to make fun of everyone else. Donna really hated him.

‘Goal..!’
Barry Woodhead sent another penalty shot into the back of the net. Donna didn't like him but she had to admit he was a good player.

Just then, a tall, heavy man in sports kit strode across the field. He came over to the football pitch and called to everyone.
'Mr Jones is sick,' he said. 'I'm Mr Stanley. From now on, I'm in charge of the team.'

Everybody looked unhappy. They knew Mr Jones was a good teacher and he was always fair. They had never seen Mr Stanley before.
'Right,' said Mr Stanley. 'Line up and we'll see what you can do!'

Join now!

The team made a line ready to practise their shots on goal. Donna stood behind Stevie Hamilton and waited for her turn. Then she heard Mr Stanley shouting and waving his arms. His face was bright red and he sounded really angry.
'Oi, you!' he shouted at Donna.
'Clear off! We don't want any girls hanging around here getting in the way!'

Donna stared at Mr Stanley.
Stevie Hamilton said, 'But, Sir… Donna is on the team. She's brilliant!'
'NO GIRLS ON MY TEAM!!' shouted Mr Stanley even louder.
'But that's not fair!'
'NO BUTS!' His face seemed about to explode.

Donna stood at the side ...

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