Short Stories Essay

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Brandon Laane 11FB

Essay Question: 

What techniques do authors use to highlight characters strengths and weaknesses?

Authors use techniques to highlight both the characters strengths and weaknesses in their stories. They have done this a number of ways in all 4 stories; The Second Hand Tongue, Tri, Rory and The Tattooist. They express this by showing humour, understanding, knowledge, vocabulary and they even use point of view to show both their weaknesses and strengths.

The story Tri was in the first person narration. The author uses the techniques of understanding and point of view. The author does this by writing the story based on the point of view of one of the three bullies that are harassing a harmless little Chinese boy. Tri has an abrupt starting to the story saying “We found him crying in the toilet again. We knew we would” which entices the reader to continue reading to find out what happens.

The unnamed character the story is based on is different from the other bullies because through the story he develops an understanding of the victims feelings when he realises the boy is just like them when the little boy yells “You wet me! You wet me!” and decides to discontinue teasing the boy. This was the perfect character to write the story from because he is on both sides and shows a thorough understanding of how both sides are feeling.

Just as abrupt as the story starts, it finishes. The young boy in an attempt to escape the bullies runs out onto the road, where he was struck by a car. The author shows the once tough bullies now feeling terrible, with the ending “There was someone screaming his name over and over again. I thought they would never stop. Then I knew it was me” which expresses just how bad the unnamed bully feels.

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The Tattooist is written in the third person view but through the tattooist’s eyes, and how he would be seeing it. Some authors like to use more original techniques to highlight characters strengths and weaknesses. This is true when it comes to The Tattooist. Understanding, knowledge and vocabulary is used to try and involve the reader and help you understand how the characters are feeling.

The story has a good vocabulary; an example of this would be “He wore his history on his arms” which shows he has tattoos on his arms that express what has happened ...

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