Women in ‘Othello’
In Shakespeare’s tragic play ‘Othello’ various issues are explored, such as the role of women. The three women, Desdemona, Emilia, and Bianca, are used in order to develop and express both the playwright’s views on women, and also the social context at that time. The women in the play lack identity, as all three women are linked with male characters; Desdemona is Othello’s wife, Emilia is Iago’s wife, and Bianca is Cassio’s mistress. During this time and within Venetian society, men were seen as the more powerful and dominant race and women are considered to be lacking in intellect.
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Quality of writing
This essay has a strong introduction, but lacks any conclusion. It is well structured, addressing each woman individually, however I wanted to see a conclusion wrapping up the significance of women in the play. Spelling, punctuation and grammar are strong throughout.
Level of analysis
The analysis in this essay is sound, with quotations being used to show good knowledge of each of the women. I liked how there was a comparison to the men, however there needed to be closer analysis of the way men describe women, and direct comparison of their language. The understanding of the women's traits is good, but it lacks the discussion of audience response or significance to the play. If I was doing this essay, I would've spoken about the patriarchal influence on the contemporary audience, and the fact that Shakespeare gives Bianca the opportunity to prevent Othello's downfall. The essay acknowledges Bianca's importance simply, but a greater awareness of dramatic effect and the direct effect on the audience would've gained higher marks. I would've liked to have seen some imagery analysed, as Iago describes women in a derogatory manner. The essay could've explored terms such as tragedy, delving into a discussion debating whether Othello is, in fact, a tragedy of women.
Response to question
The introduction to this essay promises a very strong argument, however it was a shame that some of these concepts were not explored. The essay superbly picks out the evidence and suggests the meanings, however it does not address the audience response or why Shakespeare has chosen to do so. It is this extra discussion which stops this essay from getting top marks.