Daniel Aldous-Critchley        English Coursework        Year 10 Set 1

The Test

Thank-you for letting me come here today. I have a story that I can tell to only one person, who I trust. I know you won’t say anything and I am grateful for that.

You’ve probably read about the Benjy Blesker case in the newspapers, well I was the Doctor of Science and medicines that Mr Wedge, the defence lawyer called upon for assistance in getting that boy off of the hook. This was an interesting case, I must admit that. My mind is still not made up whether Benjy did do it or not, but for Vernon’s sake thank goodness the jury were convinced enough to let him off. It wasn’t what you’d call an open and shut case, there were so many technicalities involved; objections, tests, witnesses who thought they saw something but weren’t sure, and oh the list goes on and on.

        I don’t want to take up too much of your time so I’ll cut to the chase. Anyway sure enough there is a test called the reduced phenolphthalein test which detects the presence of blood with far greater accuracy  than benzidine. But I was weak and money was tight, I only had 14 more mortgage payments to make before I owned my house! I figured that tyrants like this Benjy should be off the streets regardless of whether he knifed that kid. What the hell was he doing carrying a knife around anyway?

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I had already been following the case with interest because it was my neighbourhood that it happened in. When Mr Wedge came to me asking for my assistance I denied that I knew anything about it. I don’t claim to being a liar, I am a biochemist but I thought if I was pure of the case I wouldn’t be classed as prejudiced either way, whatever was wanted of me. Here is where I start to do the wrong thing. Vernon needed a stronger and more precise test than the benzidine one. I told him there was, and proceeded to ...

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