2.4 Account of a Holiday
El verano pasado, fui a Florida con mi familia. Viajé en un avión y dure nueve horas en el
avión y después viajamos en un coche para tres horas, pero era muy aburrido. Nos
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This essay deserves a 3*. Overall it is easy to read, most ideas are expressed with clarity but it can be improved by using the correct tenses. Also connectives/prepositions need to be managed more appropriately, the same goes for definite articles eg. El, La, Los, Las, etc