Christopher's Trip to the Dentist

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Cassie McIntyre

Christopher’s Trip to the Dentist

On Saturday Father took me to the dentist. I do not like the Dentist. My Dentist is called Mr Patel and he is a very short man who wears a white coat and always wears those rubber gloves that smell of hospitals and he is foreign. Father said the appointment would be very quick as I always brush my teeth twice a day. I like brushing my teeth because I like the way the bristles of the brush feel against my gums when I am brushing. I once watched a programme on brushing teeth at school I found it very interesting and now I know how to brush my teeth properly. Firstly everyone makes the mistake of making their toothbrush wet before putting the toothpaste on it which is entirely wrong and then people often use too much toothpaste and you only need 2 centimetres of toothpaste which is why I keep a ruler next to my toothbrush to make sure I always use the correct amount and you should always start by brushing your teeth at the sides but you should not brush too hard because that can cause the enamel to be brushed away. Then you should brush the tops of your teeth making sure you get your brush into any gaps to make sure any unwanted bacteria is brushed away and then you should brush the backs of your teeth in the same way that you brushed the front. Once you have done all that you should rinse your toothbrush and brush your gums to clean them and remove any bacteria and then you should rinse your mouth out with cold water and then you’re done.

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        When we arrived at the dentist which is in the high street opposite the greengrocers where they sell really nice apples which are all red and shiny and the skin gets stuck between your teeth. Father told me to sit down nicely on one of the chairs in the waiting room whilst he told the lady behind the desk that I was there. The lady appeared to be very short and fat but I did not know whether this was because she was sitting down or because she was short and fat anyway. I didn’t know where to sit because ...

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