How Seamus Deane makes 'Pistol' an unsettling and disturbing moment in the novel: 'Reading in the Dark'
How does Deane make Pistol an unsettling and disturbing moment in the novel?
The most significant way Deane makes this chapter so unsettling and disturbing is the detailed language he presents the reader with. He uses this description to conjure up imagery within the readers’ mind, which has a profound effect. He described the gun as… ‘a long, chill pistol, blue-black and heavy’. Deane writes ‘blue-black’ to suggest a bruise, the aftermath to what would be a violent act. Lots of language in this scene, similar to the previous description, is pejorative trying to portray the disturbing nature of the situation. One of the most effective uses of negative language is the pathetic fallacy used in the first line of ‘Pistol’, ‘In that dark winter’. This insinuates that something sinister, something dreadful will soon occur. Deane uses words like ‘smuggled’ instead of taken, and ‘argument’ instead of discussion to show the aggressive nature of this section.